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Name: Kenny Hart

Kenny Hart is an award-winning singing songwriter and freelance writer from the Greater Cincinnati area who currently writes music articles and reviews for Indie-music.com and his own "blogzine", The Singing Songwriter. With more than thirty years' experience as a writer, singer, and musician, Kenny has touched and been touched by nearly every musical genre; his passion for music is not fettered by boundaries.

Monday, December 13, 2004

Tip: Writing Your Title vs. Titling Your Lyric

Recently, I posed this question to members of our Songwriting Workshop at Southbrook (SWS): "Do you 'write your title' or 'title your lyric'?" Some of the responses agree with other professionals' admonitions to always work on the basis of "title first". Assuming that your title is your hook, writing your title keeps you focused on the main lyric idea and keeps your lyric from straying off into neverland. Moreover, a memorable title is intimately tied to the musical idea. Think about it; what comes to mind when you read the title "Jingle Bells"? (Well, it IS the Holiday Season!) On the other hand, it is also possible to come up with a memorable title for a finished lyric (think "Annie's Song" by John Denver, for one). Many writers (myself included) do both, depending on the requirements of each song's creative process.

SWS Blue Diamond Award-winning songwriter Dick Plunk says: "I always write to the hook when my song is lyric based (99 % of the time). Every now and then I'll come up with something musical which needs lyrics, but that's rare. I can't remember ever writing something and then having to ceate a hook for it."

SWS 2004 Songwriter of the Year and Blue Diamond Award-winning songwriter Dave Blowers says: "I would have to go with ‘write your title’. I’m a huge Beatles fan. Back when I bought my first Beatles album, I actually did it because I was intrigued by the all the interesting song titles. Things like Strawberry Fields’, ‘I Am The Walrus’, ‘Sgt. Pepper’s Lonely Hearts Club Band’, ‘Yellow Submarine’, etc. I learned a great lesson from that. By the time I was writing songs of my own I would spend hours just dreaming up flowery song titles for imaginary albums I would one day record.

"Early on as a songwriter, I understood the power of a captivating title. I still think that way and always aim to write songs having titles that are unique and memorable on their own. "

Songwriter Kelly Smith says: "I wonder if the two options are limiting. I think it's possible to develop a concept without an absolute hook and find the hook in the writing, which isn't necessarily titling the lyrics.

"I've started with story ideas, knowing where I wanted the song to start and finish, without having a true hook in mind. Other times I've had some nice opening lines without the rest of the story. In both situations I've been able to find solid hooks in the writing. It's more of a discovery process than writing
to fit.

"Of course, writing to a hook/title can be easier, and searching for a line that sounds like a hook in lyrics more convenient, but discovering a song/title is just
as viable in the creative process. I've heard that Dave Mathews writes that way."

SWS Coordinator and Blue-Diamond Award-winning songwriter Greg Althammer says: "I tend to agree with Kelly. It's a great way to write and I do write like that a lot. But I think some of my best songs have come out of the idea and not the hook first. I find the hook later in the process.

"I don't think there's a "write" or wrong :)"

SWS Training Coordinator and Blue-Diamond Award-winning songwriter Jim Melko says: "Ditto. 'Wasted Paper' is an example of that. The hook came when I wrote the lyric, but I had the idea for the song - and knew it was about a trash can - two years before I wrote it."

Nashville songwriter Steve Jones says: "99% of the time my melodies precede both title and lyrics. When a title comes along that fits the mood of a given music structure, lyrics finally drag along. This is only because I have so many unused melodies and grooves. When I lived up north, SWS members frequently came up with better titles than I originally started out with. The new improved hook usually was followed by a nearly total re-write of the lyrics. Since moving to Nashville, with each new song, I have to review comments from previous SWS critiques and ask myself; What would Jim do?"

Wednesday, December 08, 2004

News: Songwriters Workshop at Southbrook Presents First Annual Blue Diamond Awards

On December 6, 2004, the Songwriters Workshop at Southbrook (SWS), the Dayton/Cincinnati Chapter of the Nashville Songwriters Association International (NSAI), held its first annual Blue Diamond Awards dinner and presentation. Based on the SWS Compilation Project, The Blue Diamond Awards are given to the best SWS songwriters and their songs as judged by noted songwriters, producers, and music industry professionals. The 2004 project comprised two CDs: a Top 10 SWS Songs CD, based solely on the merits of each song; and a Top 10 SWS Songwriters Showcase CD, containing songs by writers whose entries exemplify SWS songwriting standards. Thirty-five SWS songwriters entered 121 songs in this year's competition and all received a blue ribbon for their participation.

Top 10 SWS Songs CD Winners:

(The judges were unable to break an eight-way tie for seventh place, resulting in 14 winning songs!)

1. James Bond - Dave Blowers
2. Mama's In The Mood - Tony Kippins, Dave Blowers, Tim Skeen
3. Can't Wait For The Rain - Greg Althammer, Dave Blowers, Darren Wiedman
4. Eye On Eternity - Edward Livesay
5. Cowgirl - Judy Carnes, Tedd Swormstedt
6. Thank God It's Monday - Jim Melko
7. Do Over - Tim Skeen, Dick Plunk
7. Read My Hips - Ann Jacobs, B. Andrews, L. Sanders
7. Party Of One - Judy Carnes, Eric Measel, Tedd Swormstedt
7. It Took All Of History - Jim Melko, Jon Bontempi
7. You Don't Deserve - Tedd Swormstedt
7. Strawberry Moon - Dave Lenahan, Tim Skeen
7. No Room For Hate - Nick Cardilino
7. Louisville Slugger - Tim Skeen, Greg Althammer, Alex Fekkos, Dave Lenahan

Top 10 SWS Songwriters Showcase CD Winners:

(listed in no particular order)

Too Many Walls - Jim Melko, Vaughn Welches, Tony Kippins
Playing With The Boys - Judy Carnes
Living In The Doghouse - Darren Wiedman
The Tears Come One At A Time - Nick Cardilino
Wasted Paper - Jim Melko, Stephanie Welches
When You Touch Me - Vaughn Welches, Jim Melko
Headed To Vegas - Martin Buchanan, Laura Black
When Daddy Played Guitar - Jim Melko
Never Said A Word About The War - Jim Melko, Chuck Pinney
Visiting Day - Kenny Hart, Peggy Hart

The judges were Marc Alan Barnette, writer of David Ball's single "Too Much Blood In My Alcohol Level" and a Nashville icon who has voluntarily helped hundreds of songwriters; Gary Talley, former SWS Adopt-A-Shop Pro songwriter, lead guitarist for the Boxtops and author of Guitar Playing for Songwriters; and Doak Turner, former NSAI Coordinator and current Nashville Songwriter and Networking leader and adviser.

In a surprise final highlight to the event, SWS Coordinators Jim Melko, Greg Althammer, and Nick Cardilino presented a special SWS Songwriter of the Year award to David Blowers for his exemplary songwriting and dedication to SWS's vision and mission.

"Last night was definitely more attention than I deserved," David said, "but thanks again to all of you for being so gracious. Another thing that made the night very, very, special for me was that my wife and two daughters were there. I am normally pretty private about what's going on with my songwriting and they don't really have a clear idea of the role it plays in my life. But last night helped them to see that it's not just a hobby, but part of who I am. And there's nothing cooler than hearing one of your kids say, 'Daddy, I'm really proud of you.'"

Congratulations, Dave! And congratulations to the winners and everyone who participated in the Compilation Project, the volunteers and the coordinators on the resounding success of the First Annual SWS Blue Diamond Awards. Everyone, I'm sure, is looking forward to next year's competition!